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雅思小作文最常犯的错误,没有之一

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1. Cinema increased from 2000 to 2005. (attendance)


Cinema attendance increased from 2000 to 2005.

The number of people attending / who attended the cinema increased from 2000 to 2005.




2. Saudi Arabia fell significantly to 270 million barrels a year. (oil production).


Oil production in Saudi Arabia fell significantly to 270 million barrels a year.

The amount of oil produced in Saudi Arabia fell significantly to 270 million barrels a year.

Saudi Arabia's oil production fell significantly to 270 million barrels a year.




3. 2000 to 2010 saw DVDs drop from 70% to 60%. (purchased).

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2000 to 2010 saw the number of DVDs purchased drop from 70% to 60%.

2000 to 2010 saw the purchase of DVDs drop from 70% to 60%.




4. From 1975 to 2000, hamburgers increased dramatically from 10 to 100 times per year. At the same time, fish and chips fell significantly to just under 40. (consumption)


From 1975 to 2000, the consumption of hamburgers increased dramatically from 10 to 100 times per year. At the same time, the number of times that fish and chips were eaten fell significantly to just under 40.


5. While buses fell from just over 25% to around 16% in 2000, cars increased dramatically to over 35%. Meanwhile, bikes fell over this time frame. (use / usage)


While bus usage fell from just over 25% to around 16% in 2000, cars as a mode of travel increased dramatically to over 35%. Meanwhile, the use of bikes fell over this time frame.




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